Lorena’s Reviews > These Violent Delights > Status Update

author doesn’t understand pov??? are we working with third person limited or omniscient??? why are we jumping back and forth

with bangs, i’m miss delicious?

i don’t even know if i would call this a romeo and juliet retelling outside of like a couple similar names and familiar scenes. which lowkey sucks because the parts i am enjoying are those that draw closer to r+j.

i like when she goes back to the r+j of it all. seems like the strongest part.

save me phoebe bridgers.. phoebe bridgers save me…. or i guess kill me is the song in listening to…

there’s a lot going on here

the writing here may also…not… be too.. good…?