BarelyReads’s Reviews > Immortal > Status Update

Never before have i seen a plot twist so bad.. that it drops a nuke on any progress the book was making.

Character motivations? now nonsensical

Plot threads wiped away.

This book has given me a headache

Sigh...... whatever

this book seems eager to pull whatever plot twist it wants out of its bum no matter if it makes sense or not

But i guess our fmc goes from average princess to the most special special chosen one princess ever

This girl would get scammed so easily

This book is making the fatal flaw of doing nothing interesting with its characters or plot

despite the fmc beginnings as a sickly child and for the first time in her life, can sit upright and work for an entire day, she bares no sign of such monumental change.

She interchangeable with any number of sassy, hot headed fmcs who deny ever possibly having feelings for the tall, handsome, powerful male lead.

Boring..

This book needs to hit the breaks.

In the first chapter alone they try to shove so much information down my throat my eyes started to glaze over

The city is burning, its the god of war, his power is ice related, we are the only place to worship the gods while other places are ignorant, I have always been sickly, also I'm poisoned, poisoned by what? the waters of death of course and theirs no cure. Oh wait there is-