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Oh uh ok they didn’t fall into water, they fell into air. This author needs to figure out how to describe stuff.
— Sep 11, 2026 11:33AM
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Christian
is on page 131 of 197
Ok it’s pretty good-basically just a more surreal wizard of oz (magical secret land, quirky magical characters who help or hinder the heroes, even a brick road). But the writing could have used some editing in the sense that much of the action is confusing. Someone just got pushed and fell. Apparently they fell into water, though it just says they fell. Huh?
— Sep 11, 2026 11:12AM