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Amelia Balzer
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“Okaaay.”
“He’s the slipperiest bastard alive”
I cannot with this dialogue, it is so cringey. Everything feels so forced and awkward. I don’t think you could write a more “pick me girl” than Saeris. We get it. You wear pants, not dresses. But wait, she’s “too pretty” to wear pants. You’ve got to be kidding me with this bs.
— Sep 11, 2026 07:25PM
“He’s the slipperiest bastard alive”
I cannot with this dialogue, it is so cringey. Everything feels so forced and awkward. I don’t think you could write a more “pick me girl” than Saeris. We get it. You wear pants, not dresses. But wait, she’s “too pretty” to wear pants. You’ve got to be kidding me with this bs.
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