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The narrative has such a focus on the nipples of the MC and also rape. It's a lot. And all the characters talk exactly like each other, they all talk like the MC who has a TBI. they don't sound different and that's an issue
— Sep 11, 2026 11:50PM
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It's me, a girl who is confused and doesn't understand what the fuck is going on. However, thank god, this is by design. We have another woman with a brain injury a la hurricane girl, but this was done by medical malpractice. The voice is not consistent with being both understandably confused and unhinged convoluted. It's trying to marry two really weird books: hurricane girl and paradise logic.
— Sep 11, 2026 05:41PM