Mackenzie Pimpo’s Reviews > The Story Peddler > Status Update

Brooo poor Brack did NOT deserve that!

So I know no one asked for my opinion, but... GIVING REAL-WORLD ITEMS DUMB SELF-EXPLANATORY NAMES IS NOT WORLDBUILDING. They're not grazers. They're COWS. Not bitter bean drink. COFFEE. Not back-bag. KNAPSACK, SATCHEL, even BACKPACK. Brooooo it hurts. And also, a medieval peasant is not going to care about the last time her greasy hair had a "proper washing." Okay, I'm done now😂

I don't like. It's... cliche. I do like the narrator - she has life to her and is anything but monotone - but so far this story is meh. Will I finish it? DUH. The audiobook is only 6hrs long and I am behind on my reading challenge😅