Joan’s Reviews > Stormin' Norman > Status Update
Joan
is 40% done
Dnf. It's suddenly gone silly, and not in a good way. Shame really, because it was promising, despite the poor formatting.
— Jun 01, 2017 10:52PM
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Joan
is 25% done
This would be a hell of at lot more readable if there were spaces between paragraphs to denote changes in scene, time etc. I am constantly having to re-read parts to try to make sense of what is/has happened. It's irritating to say the least.
— Jun 01, 2017 10:43PM
