Kaylie Carroll’s Reviews > To Unleash a Darker Fate > Status Update
Kaylie Carroll
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OK I HAVE WORDS: spoilers below
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I have a bone to pick with what has already happened so far. Vale shows back up in chapter 4. Where is the longing and the tension of being apart?! It felt too soon for him to catch up with Raven. Also how did Raven not know The Collective was who snatched them??? I know as the reader you know more than the MCs but like sometimes Ravens internal thoughts are???
— Sep 15, 2026 08:15AM
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I have a bone to pick with what has already happened so far. Vale shows back up in chapter 4. Where is the longing and the tension of being apart?! It felt too soon for him to catch up with Raven. Also how did Raven not know The Collective was who snatched them??? I know as the reader you know more than the MCs but like sometimes Ravens internal thoughts are???
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