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Why is the librarian so okay with forced exhibitionism? especially when one of them is her daughter's half brother???

Like I can definitely tell what this author's kinks are, and they sure are... Interesting.

Him: Don't force sex on me
Her: Forces sexual situations on him all the time
Her: Does it in the scene where his dad comes into the room
Him: is mad
Her: Why are you mad at me???

This MC is so annoying. He's not any better, but like. Why would anyone think this girl is a good person? She's been awful the whole book

Yeahhh giving your girlfriend an orgasm with a glass while forcing a bunch of guys to be in the room at the same time (not knowing it's happening because she's invisible) is yikes enough considering you're forcing them into your kinks. But having one of those guys being YOUR FATHER is A Choice (tm)

The amount of times the risk of exhibitionism kink is presented is really giving me the ick

You can really tell when a FMC is meant to be a self insert

There are a lot of inconsistencies in this book