JoannaReads’s Reviews > Lorenzo's Claim > Status Update
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is 45% done
The FMC is fucking great
But the MMC? He is like a whiny bitch and behaves like a child
Also the dialogue between the men?? So weird and inaccurate
These are supposed to be the head of the bratva and the Sicilian Mafia but they sound and behave like children... It's laughable
I really wanted to support small and indie authors but it's hard when this is what you get ...I'm still giving it a shot but close to DNFing
— Sep 17, 2026 07:28AM
But the MMC? He is like a whiny bitch and behaves like a child
Also the dialogue between the men?? So weird and inaccurate
These are supposed to be the head of the bratva and the Sicilian Mafia but they sound and behave like children... It's laughable
I really wanted to support small and indie authors but it's hard when this is what you get ...I'm still giving it a shot but close to DNFing
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