Ulysese’s Reviews > The Court of Broken Knives > Status Update
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is 60% done
Is it too edgy or nihilistic? Excerpt from an early chapter: A priestess eyes are cutout and hands are cutoff for allowing a candle to blow out offending the gods. There has been a ton an exposition but none telling or showing the religious background. Prose and grim dark mix at intervals seems forced. Are there any metaphors in the prose I missed?
A boring slog of a story two thirds complete.
— Sep 18, 2026 01:57PM
A boring slog of a story two thirds complete.
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