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Ascolta
is 3% done
Oh no. Did a Harvard undergrad write this with Chat-GPT for their creative writing class. Main character who devotes paragraphs and paragraphs to THE JOY OF RUNNING 😳
— 15 hours, 19 min ago
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Ascolta
is 32% done
Okay, I did FF through the first para, and once the story picks up, cringe prose drops. Also - turns out - a key problem is the narrator is decidedly mid.
— 12 hours, 12 min ago