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Jake
is on page 154 of 352
"Sometimes, if I am feeling poorly..."
Dude apparently has inordinate difficulty feeling. He also fails parallelism in sentences and had a semicolon where there should have been a comma—all on page 154.
Maybe this is what I get for reading something written by a journalist.
— Sep 21, 2026 03:26PM
Dude apparently has inordinate difficulty feeling. He also fails parallelism in sentences and had a semicolon where there should have been a comma—all on page 154.
Maybe this is what I get for reading something written by a journalist.
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Jake
is on page 110 of 352
The titration diary is an interesting literary form. Clearly some parts of this are far more polished than others. Though now we have dangling modifiers and missing serial commas.
— Sep 13, 2026 12:31PM
Jake
is on page 80 of 352
Now we've got "pour over," and italicized thoughts clashing with italicized titles.
Being insane doesn't mean you don't need an editor.
— Sep 12, 2026 10:00AM
Being insane doesn't mean you don't need an editor.
Jake
is on page 39 of 352
"I feel badly."
Okay, maybe civilization could have done a little better.
— Sep 11, 2026 05:31PM
Okay, maybe civilization could have done a little better.