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I want to dnf this so bad the grammatical errors are crazy, Microsoft word could have edited this if you couldn’t get human eyes on it. The story is fine but the writing is novice and there are spelling mistakes, punctuation errors, and choppy awkward phrases. Dialogue is stunted.
— Sep 27, 2026 07:11AM

