Ash’s Reviews > Look What You Made Me Do > Status Update
Ash
is 39% done
This reads like a draft. It has so many errors (particularly incongruencies) and is written in a way that is hard to follow. It's also giving r/menwritingwomen which doesn't help because I'm cringeing at this weird male fantasy of how women think and behave - à la "I know women! I see them in movies and porn!". I'm going to take respite and come back to it before declaring DNF.
— 21 hours, 22 min ago
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