marz native ’s Reviews > Undone > Status Update

This is genuinely bad like???

Like literally ever chapter ends with “I gotta go” and someone running off to avoid a conversation. How pathetic

I’m sorry but this constant allusion to That Thing That Happened then never elaborating on it in the slightest…. But continuing to go back to shit like everything is normal is fucking annoying!!! Like enough!!!!

alright this is played

Like they’re both so… childish what am I reading

Another 2 star reading incoming I’m so annoyed

This is boring I’m sorry

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“Bad boy” trope got old after 2014. We not reading Bizzle fics anymore lay it to rest

I already know I’m not gon like him.