blue’s Reviews > A Torch Against the Night > Status Update
blue
is 35% done
Just realized one of my major issues with the prose is the overuse of proper nouns. Elias did this / dialog / elias did that - all in one three sentence paragraph. Too much. It worsens the stilted feel the prose already suffers from
— 22 hours, 35 min ago
Like flag
blue’s Previous Updates
blue
is 62% done
I keep almost coming around to liking this book and then something happens that makes me remember i do Not
— 16 hours, 10 min ago