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Dear lord. What am I actually reading right now? “Inside this sealed exhibit bag were five small wraps of marijuana. Altogether, they wouldn’t have been enough to fill a cereal bowl.”
Is this supposed to be his best attempt at imagery? It’s weird to compare an amount of weed to a container with which you’d eat out of. Why not say she couldn’t make more than X number of joints??
— 10 hours, 34 min ago
Is this supposed to be his best attempt at imagery? It’s weird to compare an amount of weed to a container with which you’d eat out of. Why not say she couldn’t make more than X number of joints??
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Kari
is on page 45 of 481
An ungodly number of twists doesn’t make a story good. More than anything it feels unrealistic and disjointed. I know it’s not going for realism, but uugggghhh.
— 9 hours, 45 min ago