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He dropped everything to be there while she’s sick and I know I’m meant to be swooning but this is 1) cringe af (and not in a fun way) and 2) I hate when it feels like the mmc only exists for the fmc. Maverick has absolutely 0 sense of self or personality. It’s all just Emmy Emmy Emmy and it’s just boring

The author wrote a smut scene that spans 3 chapters and somehow managed to make it not even a little bit hot💀

“I’ve always considered myself a feminist, but there’s something so s3xy about a man in a backwards hat that has me ready to drop to my knees for the patriarchy” 🥴🥴🥴

The author is trying way too hard to write banter and it’s falling completely flat. I don’t feel an ounce of chemistry between maverick and Emmy 🥴

The writing is so clunky💀 two chapters in and a secondary character is giving a speech about how great, sweet, loyal, protective etc the mmc is. These are not things that I should just be told before even meeting him. It should be shown instead!