Chelsey Vipont’s Reviews > Nightshade > Status Update
Chelsey Vipont
is 20% done
It feels very rushed.
Kinda wish ms woods had of slowed down and let Divya become friends instead of insta friendship.
The writing is very immature. A lot of angry internal monologue instead of story telling. More show and not tell.
— 1 hour, 1 min ago
Kinda wish ms woods had of slowed down and let Divya become friends instead of insta friendship.
The writing is very immature. A lot of angry internal monologue instead of story telling. More show and not tell.
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