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The book will be 100% more interesting if there is real danger to the characters, right now they are just stream rolling in the 14th century . Marek just pulled an arrow from his thighs with his bare hands, the next scene he was sprinting…

The choppy writing style becomes increasingly difficult to read

I think the problem I have this is book so far is that the danger doesn’t seem dangerous enough, already they escape the jail two times using brute force, these people are scholars not ninja warrior athletes