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Fae
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<"Cotsgrave," I said, putting the read pages facedown on the floor, "if you were a client and came to me for editing, I'd fire you. Footnotes are your friend.">
Ha! That's RICH, coming from you, MC. "Do as I say, not as I do," I suppose, huh?
— Sep 27, 2026 04:12PM
Ha! That's RICH, coming from you, MC. "Do as I say, not as I do," I suppose, huh?
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Fae
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She TOLD you that. You didn't even have to infer! She told you! Jesus flipping christ
— 8 hours, 36 min ago
Fae
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Was ANYONE surprised by the white stone?
And that stone carving on the goat property is going to be relevant, right?
— Sep 28, 2026 10:30PM
And that stone carving on the goat property is going to be relevant, right?
Fae
is on page 279 of 385
The insistence that magic would be stumped by an IUD strikes me as exceptionally odd. Maybe the character is supposed to be clinging to any reassurance she can—but since she's supposed to be writing about these events after the fact, it feels dumb (especially since it has come up at least twice).
— Sep 28, 2026 10:28PM
Fae
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Bit confused, bit bored, trying to focus on the fraction of intrigue I feel to push through.
Main character dull and unlikeable. Don't hate her, but... I don't like her.
— Sep 27, 2026 02:14PM
Main character dull and unlikeable. Don't hate her, but... I don't like her.