sai ♡’s Reviews > Heat of the Everflame > Status Update

i think multi-povs could save this series

plot armour goes crazy ig 🤸‍♀️ i need the author to commit and kill a character

ik the fmc and mmc are set up to be perfect for each other but i keep seeing the wlw in everything!!
if the queens of umbros & lumnos hate f*cked i'd be sooo content

told Em this alr but i find myself feeling like a beta reader who can no longer edit/suggest corrections for this book 💀 the base storyline is good, with a few tweaks i’d make it BETTER