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i see the potential there, in the idea of the story. i just hope it will go in the right direction from here on out. so far not very eventful, very little dialogue, which is not really ideal for me, but im only 50 pages in. so lets trust the process.
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niri
is on page 28 of 360
i see the potential there, in the idea of the story. i just hope it will go in the right direction from here on out. so far not so eventful, very little dialogue, which is not really for me, but im only 30 pages in. so lets trust the process. plus, in those pages there's a lot of backstory so that is really great for the understanding of whats going on right now. looking forward to what happens next.
— 1 hour, 1 min ago