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Anita Nowak
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The editing is so poor, there are so many little mistakes and typos
— 7 hours, 21 min ago
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Anita Nowak
is on page 298 of 446
YAWN where is the plot there is literally zero substance they just travel from one place to another
— 9 hours, 41 min ago
Anita Nowak
is on page 184 of 446
The bit where they're sailing on the ocean was getting a bit boring, it was dragged out for too long in my humble opinion
— Sep 25, 2026 12:00PM
Anita Nowak
is on page 91 of 446
My imagination is having to work overtime because this author is literally giving me ✨nothing✨ the plot is interesting but the story telling fucking sucks
— Sep 24, 2026 09:44AM
Anita Nowak
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So far this is just ok. I feel like I've been thrown into the plot too fast... where is the world building? Who actually are the main characters and why should I care about them? The scene has not been set
— Sep 23, 2026 04:40PM