Sai Lee’s Reviews > Scorpion Deep > Status Update
Sai Lee
is 71% done
60% of what I read was I swear gibberish & repetitive, I fear this is suffering from too much flowery writing & less plot, the plot pieces are great but half of the metaphors could be cut out with some good editing
— Sep 28, 2026 10:31PM
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Sai Lee
is 35% done
so far this is shaping up to be better than YDNW & Hazelthorn
— Sep 23, 2026 09:07PM