Kameron’s Reviews > Dominion > Status Update

Use of "hardness" and "erection" - 8/10, better than "sword" or something

Crazy thing to read on the way to D. Ed

This is actually so cool. There are some parts that feel painfully YA to me but that's not a bad thing and the expert world building and character crafting over shadow those parts by a mile.

THANK GODSSSSSS!!!! Ok, false alarm with the love triangle. Just unrequited love and I think I accidentally spoiled something for me but I also kind of guess previously so whatever.

FINALLY!!! He has a personality now! Also, "I prefer metal restraints in bed"? If this was a fanfic it'd be tagged with "competency kink" and we'd have Blake's perspective of waking up from a wet dream of Rubi wrapping her whip around him.

It's incredibly rude for you to put that at the end of a page. Make me *turn the page* so I can keep reading about Rubi humiliating herself? How dare you.

I have suspicions that Blake is not who he says he is. Also Rubi is definitely a lost princess of the Azure Dominion.

Side note, I can't not see the trend of Small Woman Can't Pick Up Big Sword And Gets Trained By Shadow Daddy but this time she gets trained by two Shadow Daddies

THIS IS NOT HOW TRAINING WORKS IF YOU WANT HER TO WORK HER MAGIC THEN HAVE HER TRAIN THAT YOU NINCOMPOOP!!!!!

I can't escape the love triangles. Really cool concept though, amazing world building