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WHY IS EACH CHAPTER ONLY 2.5 PAGES LONG?!
and for the love of all the is good in literature... SHOW ME! DON'T TELL ME! DESCRIPTIVE IMAGERY! 🤌
— Oct 01, 2026 08:55AM
and for the love of all the is good in literature... SHOW ME! DON'T TELL ME! DESCRIPTIVE IMAGERY! 🤌
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I didn't know you could write this badly. 😬 Front loading everything to your potential bodyguard/guide/killer and acting like a buffoon who just walked out of the bar. Terrible execution.
— Sep 30, 2026 03:14PM
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We're really struggling with world-building here. This has the same feel as "Nobody's Quest" did... and I DNF'ed that one.
— Sep 30, 2026 10:01AM