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I don't know. Maybe its just because of other things going on in my life, but this book seems to be somewhat slow-moving bore. I find myself now skipping through pages, and I remember a famous author, Elmore Leonard, saying I try to leave out "overly long paragraphs or excessive descriptions—and cut those sections out to keep the narrative moving"
I'm finding that a lot in this book, stuff that should have been cut
— 10 hours, 44 min ago
I'm finding that a lot in this book, stuff that should have been cut
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