Fatima’s Reviews > Binding 13 > Status Update

Example A:

“Shannon Lynch had eyes the color of midnight blue that wouldn’t stay the fuck out of my head.”

After only having ONE convo with her… in which she had a concussion HAHAAHAHAHA
I’m already in love with Johnny wtf

Every chapter that’s his POV, is, legit, perfection!
He’s SUCH A FUCKING SIIIIIMP!! We looove a “he fell first and fell harder” trope😭😭
He’s SOOOO obsessed!! LOVE IT!

See… this books writing is so bad, but moments like this make it worth the read!!

“…and especially when you refer to girls as fair game.” Shaking my head, I added, “They’re girls, McGarry, not Pokémon cards.”

The writer just needs to polish up her writing, because the characters and the storyline are good! I cant wait to read her newest books!

Liiike… it’s SOOO repetitive! It’s literally like she mentions something, then two paragraphs later, she mentions THE SAME THING! She does this at least TWO times every couple pages!!! Uuugh… I truly hate this…

Look… this book is poorly written, but thiiis YEARNING!!

I don’t. Do whatever and whoever the hell you want,” I countered heatedly. “Just not her.”🥵

“She wasn’t like the others. This girl was different”
Ewwwww

“I took this as my cue to get the fuck away from her minor daughter.”

Bruuuuhhhh

The writing in this is TRULY awful… it’s entertaining for sure, so I’m excited about that, but it reads as if the writer really wanted to be “unique” and ate a thesaurus but didn’t digest it well