bailey elizabeth smith’s Reviews > By Divine Rage > Status Update
bailey elizabeth smith
is on page 41 of 496
so far I’m very intrigued by the mythology and themes of the book. in some ways, it is reminiscent of priory of the orange tree. however, I’m finding issue with the sentence structure and uses of words that take me out of the story. just a little clunky here and there. however, I’m hoping that will change as it goes because I am intrigued!
— Oct 06, 2026 11:35PM
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bailey elizabeth smith
is on page 322 of 496
why does every sex scene in a romantasy use the same verbiage. like, let’s get more creative out here please.
— Oct 16, 2026 03:05PM
bailey elizabeth smith
is on page 318 of 496
I’ll finish tomorrow, the jet lag is fighting me 😭 I’m liking this more as it goes along!
— Oct 15, 2026 08:46PM
bailey elizabeth smith
is on page 211 of 496
it’s starting to work out some of the issues I was having. still there a bit here and there, but the story is growing into itself more as I get further into it! I’m enjoying both POVs as well.
— Oct 11, 2026 11:02AM