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This book is written in third person perspective and yet we’re constantly in this girl’s head. Excessive monologuing, even between the dialogue, which just keeps pulling me out of the story.
— Oct 08, 2026 12:43AM
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artemisborealis
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Okay, so I dislike both the MCs. Tristan must have a magic dick or something. Either way, he’s a coercively manipulative, unsafe MMC. And Kyla? I’d say she’s as dumb as a box of rocks, but that would be insulting to the rocks.
— Oct 08, 2026 01:20AM
artemisborealis
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The constant dessert references are weird. Is it relevant to the plot besides he smells sweet? I could do without the constant comparison to food.
— Oct 08, 2026 12:47AM