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20 pages in and all the FMC thinks about is sex. It's literally how she describes others. Is she a horny teenager?
— Oct 08, 2026 03:21AM
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is 20% done
The writing is so bad that at this point the book is ruined. It doesn't matter that further along the way it might gave a hidden genius jawdropping plot or an amazing devastating romance, it can't be saved.
— Oct 09, 2026 04:26AM