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Erica
is 93% done
Bah, so far this is a promising premise (the world-building) killed by a meandering story that tries to combine Pretty Woman and a half-baked murder mystery, with one MC being a clueless, obstinate, insensitive wanker thrown in the mix for kicks and giggles.
— Jun 14, 2017 04:22PM
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Erica
is 79% done
"Derwin winced. The more he thought about his obsession with Grady's murder, the more selfish it felt".
No shit, asshole!
— Jun 14, 2017 02:28PM
No shit, asshole!
Erica
is 76% done
Eh. This is a bit shambolic. I assume all these storylines will converge.
— Jun 14, 2017 02:09PM
Erica
is 67% done
You know, Elliot, a reasonable thing to do at this point would be to UNPLUG THE COFFEMAKER. Just sayin.
— Jun 14, 2017 06:52AM
Erica
is 44% done
Wait... Did they trade life-stories? Can't remember that. Oh, well, moving on.
— Jun 13, 2017 01:05PM
