Zoe Radley’s Reviews > Bonfire and Bliss Bookstore > Status Update

I am really starting to dislike a lot of the characters in this book and how they are written… for example there is a mother of the main female character who’s husband/dad passed away and yes I get it it’s way too soon for someone to feel they can move on… but the asumption that that is it is I am sorry preposterous also the way the daughters think of their mother and father is a bit off.

Look we get it she’s rubbish at somehow knowing sayings… um yeah okay very believable it just feels awkward

No just stop stop this… ugh… it was really good and then you ruin it with I can only describe as cringe writing… fuck sake I get we get it they want to fuck but seriously!!! Just say something else anything else… ahhhh

No no stop…. I think I am throwing up
In my mouth…. Ewww that’s not kissing, snogging or whatever that’s just flat out weird 😂

Nope sorry that grandma in this is just being difficult because *plot point* fuck sake

Okay why is no one worried…. Surely that much flutter means she’s having a fit or seizures my eyes do not flutter with excitement 😂

It’s a bit hit and miss at the moment… certain parts I really get into and then it switches and suddenly I just feel a bit sick of the characters and it’s lost for me. It’s good but also feel a bit meh about it