Ruben’s Reviews > The Road > Status Update

Unreadable. Any substance is just hidden under a writing style that is unconventional just for the sake of it. Sentences just about every paragraph feel like words were just thrown in a blender. One sentence using apostrophes, then the one after leaving them out for no apparent reason.

You can make this feel bleak and archaic while still making it readable. Now it distracts from the story instead of adding to it.