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The story keeps pausing to go “wow that wasnt cool” at everything it forces into the story .
I can tell this was written by a man in his 40s
— Oct 10, 2026 02:44PM
I can tell this was written by a man in his 40s
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Pony Clown
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It’s fine so far the characters seem paper thin and I don’t love the emotions swinging so dramatically.
I appreciate that chapter 1 gets straight to the point of the book though.
— Oct 10, 2026 11:38AM
I appreciate that chapter 1 gets straight to the point of the book though.