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At some point, we have to stop copy and pasting. This is… pretty much the first book. I had hope.
I’m not here for the writing because it’s pretty mid. However, copying the same trope from the first book to the scenes is so dull.
What truly sent me into a permanent eye roll was the names. Gabriella? Really? Tem’s best friend’s name but a girl? We get you’re not great at last names, but this is lazy.
— Oct 12, 2026 09:04PM
I’m not here for the writing because it’s pretty mid. However, copying the same trope from the first book to the scenes is so dull.
What truly sent me into a permanent eye roll was the names. Gabriella? Really? Tem’s best friend’s name but a girl? We get you’re not great at last names, but this is lazy.

