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Jazz
is 12% done
The writing feels shallow. I don't know if this is because the last book I read had so much depth but I'll try to soldier on. I really need this book to get better.
— Oct 11, 2026 05:34PM
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Jazz
is 14% done
Is it normal to be this annoyed and pissed off? Like, the writing is choppy, the scenes aren't flowing properly......
— Oct 12, 2026 10:00PM
Jazz
is 12% done
I also need to say:
Aurora decided to make a deal with the Starmaker. She never even liked her life with Farren that much, why is she suddenly so resentful of the fact that she's being called to be the next Starmaker? Isn't this supposed to be a huge honor in her village?
— Oct 11, 2026 05:38PM
Aurora decided to make a deal with the Starmaker. She never even liked her life with Farren that much, why is she suddenly so resentful of the fact that she's being called to be the next Starmaker? Isn't this supposed to be a huge honor in her village?