Jaz’s Reviews > Onyx Storm > Status Update
Jaz
is 40% done
“He hands me his reins, turning those gorgeous, gold-flecked onyx eyes into weapons capable of melting the underwear straight off my body as he looks up at me.”
Girl wtf, the way most of their scenes are like this PISSES ME OFF like yes gorgeous eyes but wdym ur underwear is melting 💀 WHY ARE U FREAKY 24/7
— Oct 12, 2026 07:20AM
Girl wtf, the way most of their scenes are like this PISSES ME OFF like yes gorgeous eyes but wdym ur underwear is melting 💀 WHY ARE U FREAKY 24/7
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Jaz
is 70% done
why does it keep getting even more heartbreaking…my poor Andarna broke me into pieces, also the scene where Ridoc asks Violet how far she’s willing to go before giving up on Xaden and her struggling to name it cause she genuinely never even imagined herself doing it, even tho he himself completely lost hope and already accepted their fate UGH LIKE OMG JUST KILL ME ALREADY
— Oct 16, 2026 08:03PM
Jaz
is 60% done
Violet and Aaric CARRIED the scene with Faris, love them sm for it (also why too many generic side characters i cant keep up with them all for the life of me)
— Oct 15, 2026 10:21AM
Jaz
is 45% done
“to whom do u owe your loyalty, your Grace?…Navarre or Tyrrendor?”
“Violet”
oh okay! hes a simple man with his priorities totally set right, no one is even surprised
— Oct 12, 2026 11:47AM
“Violet”
oh okay! hes a simple man with his priorities totally set right, no one is even surprised
Jaz
is 30% done
m so happy m taking my time with this cuz genuinely i need few details to be engraved on my mind forever especially YEARNER Xaden i need him sb u dont understand, EVERYONE WANT MORE OF THESE SCENES THAN SEXUAL TENSION SCENES WHEN IS REBECCA EVER UNDERSTANDING THIS LIKE YES I WANT HIM CRASHING OUT BREAKING DOWN JUST KNOWING HE WASNT MY FIRST LOVE AS IMMATURE AS THAT SOUNDS
— Oct 11, 2026 02:21PM