kat’s Reviews > Tar City > Status Update

DNF around 40%, the dialogue between characters was kinda ass, world building was also vague and crappy, the concept of the story is dumb. When you write a character, the reader is supposed see what’s in their head, what they’re feeling. The characters are so FLAT. This book should have stayed a short story. People are out here really writing just about anything and calling themselves authors, a disgrace tbh