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Rachel
is on page 126 of 341
alright it’s fine now. but the only story i’m actually curious about is daniels. idc about divorcee’s or rich ladies losing their money. i care about GAY PEOPLE!!!
— Oct 12, 2026 08:43PM
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Rachel
is on page 171 of 341
finally they’re all coming together. again, the writing is abysmal.
— Oct 13, 2026 07:45PM
Rachel
is on page 83 of 341
OMG and i’m getting whiplash from her moving to different characters randomly and so often. just bad.
— Oct 11, 2026 08:09PM
Rachel
is on page 83 of 341
GOD the sentence structure and grammatical errors makes this so frustrating to read. like she has good ideas and i’m interested in them, but im sick of all these sentences and their commas. some of them are even incomplete sentences!!!! what the hell is even going on. i stole this book from my mom so…im glad i didn’t buy it myself.
— Oct 11, 2026 08:08PM
Rachel
is on page 38 of 341
it’s interesting…the sentence structure is kinda so bad. it’s like so many commas!!! but the story seems interesting…nothing can top the dread series though i fear.
— Oct 10, 2026 08:19PM