Jennifer’s Reviews > The Vow Eater : Thornmere Curses ( Romantasy Saga, Book 1) > Status Update

The bell rings every 180 years.
But every generation requires a tribute.
But the tribute is required when the bell rings?

In a book so focused on arithmetic, the math just ain’t mathing.

““Anger,” Larke said, simply. “I was born the year after my own mother was taken beneath the water, the last tribute before this generation’s cycle came due.”

How can a baby be born a year after their mother is no longer alive?

Part 2: so far, it follows a chronological timeline & has chapters instead of interludes.

There’s an epilogue. Then there’s another interlude, and then a part 2.

Huh?

I think this is a book made for those that only want dialogue. Snippets. Because that’s what it is.

It feels like the author wrote scenes as they came to her, and placed them in the order she wrote them, rather than in anything resembling chronological. It’s scattered snippets.