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This is too many goddamn flashbacks...

Nice that when The Boys of the cult go do their "salt year" in civilisation, they do a yaoi situationship about it.

Make Me Better is like 0.4% piss fetish by volume.

Yeah okay, but like, why is Celia *like that*? The grief is one thing but finding out about her "obsessiveness" is just weird idk.

Jesus cults can't save you from neoliberal bullshit. Actually christianity fuckin loves capitalism.

Jesus cults can't save you from multi-level-marketing scams. Only You can prevent essential oil sales.

Not a THIRD FLASHBACK IN A ROW

Not every line in this book is awful, just some of the description is a bit purple I think.

I also don't know if I recall Gailey writing so many shit similes. Like, Spread Me had pretty unremarkable prose, but who describes a forest path as a "long twisting trachea of dirt"?

Two different flashbacks, in a row.....