Camila Quach’s Reviews > Belly Up > Status Update

CONFLICT: The conflict in my story, Belly Up, is character vs. character. I know this because in Page 244, it says, "We're not breaking the law!," Dad protested..."You're a convert members of the Animal Liberation Front," Buck shot back". This shows that two characters are fighting against each other, which is character vs. character.

PREDICTIONS: In My book Belly Up, two characters from my book dive into the hippo pool to find some evidence. I already knew that there were cameras all over Funjungle, so my prediction is that the two characters are going to get caught.

POINT OF VIEW: My book Belly Up is 1st person narrator. I know this because on pg. 78, it says, "I spotted a sliver of light between two incredibly fat women". The word "I" tells the reader that the character is speaking as a 1st person.

PROTAGONIST: In My book Belly up, the protagonist is Teddy Friztroy. He is the main character who helps solves crime in my book Belly Up. He is 13 years old, goes to Lyndon B. Johnston Intermediate school, and moved to America from Africa when he was 6. He and his family live in The Texas hills in a zoo that both his parents work at. In conclusion, the protagonist in Belly Up is Teddy Fritzroy.