kit’s Reviews > The Lost Book of Lancelot > Status Update
kit
is 73% done
Very little plot rn and chara development isnt strong enough to carry the story entirely on its own imo
— Oct 21, 2026 01:42PM
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kit
is 58% done
Had to return but thoughts so far. Solid? Some parts i couldnt overlook like why did he age faster,, time,, and it was a biiit silly how often he’d go “these were times i’d look back on when it all fell apart” etc it just felt out of place with the rest of the narration,, writing is fine otherwise but a bit slow where i stopped
— Oct 17, 2026 02:43AM
kit
is 22% done
Them getting along after beefing for some reason was less satisfying than i had anticipated
— Oct 14, 2026 02:23PM

