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Terri M. is on page 40 of 263
"I would surly find Mistress Rue."

Surely???
Jun 21, 2017 04:16PM
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Terri M.
Terri M. is on page 59 of 263
Okay, I'm done; consider this one abandoned.

All of this happens with in a handful of pages.

"...ravenous carriage..."
"Both men's eyes glazed the sides of the road..."
"...the men ate their soup hurriedly, missing their mouths more than ringing them."
Jun 21, 2017 04:49PM
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Terri M.
Terri M. is on page 11 of 263
"A few snickered, I included."

Shouldn't it be 'me'?
Jun 21, 2017 03:53PM
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Terri M.
Terri M. is on page 2 of 263
"She bumped the swing with her foot, sending hot coffee in my lap, and waltzed inside trailed by obnoxious laughter.

"I wiped myself down and reluctantly washed dishes."

Huh? What? Now we are magically in the kitchen.
Jun 21, 2017 02:46PM
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