Kafka Fatra’s Reviews > The Convenience Store by the Sea > Status Update

so its connected after all huh, shes trying to do that but no, it drifts away for far too long, and far too quickly for that, no charavter depth, just dumping their trauma all over. one thing i notice is that she should introuduce mitsuri more and includes her in those povs too.

its koseis pov now, mistusri’s son. why not continue this right after chapter 1? wouldve been better, and it seems like this chapter is long. just dont get the reason behind all the extras tjat doesnt have any connection.

its getting annoying, another character again with completely different things. lack of conflict and plot. if it stsys like this im giving it a 1.

well this chapter is better written, character conflict is there, but still the story is fragmented and i feel like it is the theme. and i think im gonna treat this and read it a chapter a day because every reading session it introduces new characters and conflicts. so far the third is the best one. kind of like an interludes to rhythm of war lol.

a third character is introduced and yet again, i think the theme is about people going to tenderness.

starting to see where the book goes, maybe its about things that happen within the store? the people and how it affects them? however the pace is still too fast, going here n there quickly and theres not a lot of weight between the characters

so far, i think its a bit rushed, and there is no conflict yet, well there is but cant really say conflict. and the chapter is all mixed up, maybe im used to sanderson but well reading him is like really a lifechanging event. so lets see in the second chapter

sparks of it, just read couple of pages, doesnt really show up and not my taste, just reading in between but who knows

prologue is so romance troupe i dont like it and not my taste, but first chapter shows no sign of it. who am i to judge though? im 15 pages in