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Keshia Kay
is on page 190 of 400
I am trying with this book, but seldom have I had a stronger urge to DNF.
Most characters have little personality. Instalust chemistry (with added “yearning”). Over descriptive writing with way too much tell and exposition that feels like it’s read from a text book. I can’t connect with Kierse, so why would I care what happens to her? Story feels like a shorter, unedited, less interesting Crescent City book.
— Oct 25, 2026 07:36AM
Most characters have little personality. Instalust chemistry (with added “yearning”). Over descriptive writing with way too much tell and exposition that feels like it’s read from a text book. I can’t connect with Kierse, so why would I care what happens to her? Story feels like a shorter, unedited, less interesting Crescent City book.
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Keshia Kay
is on page 30 of 400
Writing isn’t great. Hopefully, it gets better.
— Oct 21, 2026 07:55PM

