Addie S’s Reviews > Valley of the Dolls > Status Update

I would like to know more about Allen.

Not really a sidekick but Neely is one of Anne's best friends, and Anne tends to help Neely a lot.

I chose the pills and pill bottle to represent Anne. Both are on the outside of the book.

I would tell Anne to communicate how she feels with Allen if she doesn't want to marry him.

Yes the dialogue sounds realistic. Right now my dialogue is telling my characters backstory.

Right now Anne wants to let Allen know she does not want to marry him but Allen is in her way, and Neely the other character wants to be in a musical so bad but her partners kicked her out and she isn't apart of the show.